some snow yesterday
as I go for donuts clear
skies and frost greet me
Discussion
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Some gaps can't be filled -
like New England street potholes,
centers of donuts
#SmallPoems #SundayHaiku response
Do you think punctuation is an issue in haiku?
Today, I went without.
Is there a consensus about using punctuation?
Bigger question: donut or doughnut?
@Algot I do often find myself using punctuation in haiku but I am not sure it is needed. It's the old writer/editor in me, I think. I think they are fine without as with.