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Jess Mahler
Jess Mahler
@JessMahler@indiepocalypse.social  ·  activity timestamp 2 days ago

Writing time! Goal today is 1500 words on Elisabeti.

Wish me luck!

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Jess Mahler
Jess Mahler
@JessMahler@indiepocalypse.social replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 days ago

Ugh. Focus is absolutely shot. Probably related to how fucked up my sleep was last night.

Stopping early, got 586 words written, so that's something.

Final lines:
“I need to think,” she said finally, as much to the staring wolves as to Aswathi. “I need time to think,” she said more firmly. “Come back tomorrow and... and we will talk.”
“Of course,” Aswathi withdrew his hand and bowed slightly. “I would make you happy, I promise.” And he turned and walked away.

Word spread quickly through the refugee camp, as such things often do.

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Jess Mahler
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@JessMahler@indiepocalypse.social  ·  activity timestamp 3 days ago

soul, not yet ready to emerge after her long rest, but alert and delighting in the feeling of their cub resting in Elisabeti's arms.

Elisabeti didn't have long to wait. Just as the sun slipped below the horizon, Aswathi the carter came out of the growing darkness. He smiled at the sight of Elisabeti and her cub. “You are here! You are well! Should you be on your feet already?”

“We are here,” Elisabeti gave a watery chuckle, “and we are as well as can be.

“I wanted to thank you, for all you have done for us.”

Aswathi shrugged uncomfortably. “It was little enough.”

Little it may have been, but it had meant a great deal to Elisabeti and the other wolves. The human army had been inclined to give little way of supplies and support to the defeated refugees, even knowing the first wolves to reach them were the injured and pregnant. When Elisabeti had gone into labor before the wolf midwives could arrive, the humans had refused even to send one of their own midwives to the refugees, leaving them to struggle alone to aid Elisabeti through the birthing.

Only Aswathi had offered any aid, spending his own pay to get fuel for the fires and rags for cleaning.
Elisabeti did not argue Aswathi's demurral, instead holding up her cub for him to see clearly. “He needs a name,” she said simply. “Would you permit him to be named Aswathi?”

Aswathi stared at her, stunned. “Surely there is another he should be named for? His father?”

But Elisabeti shook her head. “That is not our way. And... I will carry the grief of my mate's loss the rest of my life. Should I burden my child with that weight?

“No, let his name be the memory of a good man. Especially in these times.”

Aswathi hesitated, but eventually nodded. “If that is your wish.”
“Thank you.”
~~~

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Jess Mahler
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@JessMahler@indiepocalypse.social  ·  activity timestamp 3 days ago

Managed 1059 words this evening. Almost 4000 words total written for Elisabeti. Since I'm aiming for ~30,000 that's more than a tenth of the way through the story.

Final snippet:

Even as a youth he hadn't made this much a fool of himself talking with a woman, but as a youth the stakes had never been this high.

“What is it, Aswathi?” Elisabeti asked with a sad smile.

“I... would you marry me?”

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