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David Revoy
@davidrevoy@framapiaf.org  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
fediverse Fediverse community experiment: Need your help with a final panel idea for this comic draft! Comment with your suggestions! I'll finalize the one I like the most and give you credit in the comic.

#writing #webcomic #experimental

A webcomic storyboard in four panels, black and white and sketchy:

Panel 1: A cute mermaid sings, eyes closed, with a melancholy expression, sitting on a rock in the middle of the ocean. She plays a small harp.

Panel 2: Aerial view: many boats gather, forming a circle around the mermaid, drawn in by her performance.

Panel 3: The mermaid bows modestly and says "Thank you" to the enthusiastic applause of the sailors on the boats, who give her a standing ovation.

Panel 4: [Empty] You decide! (placeholder: a large '?' sign and text inviting you to read the post for suggestions).
A webcomic storyboard in four panels, black and white and sketchy: Panel 1: A cute mermaid sings, eyes closed, with a melancholy expression, sitting on a rock in the middle of the ocean. She plays a small harp. Panel 2: Aerial view: many boats gather, forming a circle around the mermaid, drawn in by her performance. Panel 3: The mermaid bows modestly and says "Thank you" to the enthusiastic applause of the sailors on the boats, who give her a standing ovation. Panel 4: [Empty] You decide! (placeholder: a large '?' sign and text inviting you to read the post for suggestions).
A webcomic storyboard in four panels, black and white and sketchy: Panel 1: A cute mermaid sings, eyes closed, with a melancholy expression, sitting on a rock in the middle of the ocean. She plays a small harp. Panel 2: Aerial view: many boats gather, forming a circle around the mermaid, drawn in by her performance. Panel 3: The mermaid bows modestly and says "Thank you" to the enthusiastic applause of the sailors on the boats, who give her a standing ovation. Panel 4: [Empty] You decide! (placeholder: a large '?' sign and text inviting you to read the post for suggestions).
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Valvin (framapiaf)
@valvin@framapiaf.org replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@davidrevoy he is back and eat them all !
a big fish eat a whole isle where pepper is located (from episode 10 of pepper&carrot)
a big fish eat a whole isle where pepper is located (from episode 10 of pepper&carrot)
a big fish eat a whole isle where pepper is located (from episode 10 of pepper&carrot)
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Valvin (framapiaf)
@valvin@framapiaf.org replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@davidrevoy more positive and now i read other proposals it could join some of the ideas:

giant fishes are waiting to eat people but as they are grateful a message announces "DO NOT EAT". fishes are furious but accept the decision.

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David Revoy
@davidrevoy@framapiaf.org replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@valvin 🤣
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der.hans
@lufthans@mastodon.social replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@davidrevoy she announces the next song will be the theme from Jaws
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der.hans
@lufthans@mastodon.social replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@davidrevoy the ships line up for autographs

a) she's signing with both hand and tail
b) she uses an octopus to sign 8 items at the same time
c) she uses an octopus, squid or cuttlefish[0] to ink her pen
d) some combination of above
e) ignore all this and do something else :)

[0] Maybe a young mermaid appears to hug the cuttlefish call it a cuddlefish

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David Revoy
@davidrevoy@framapiaf.org replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@lufthans Cute!
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Nartagnan ⏚
@nartagnan@mstdn.fr replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@davidrevoy

"Now that I have your attention, could you stop trashing the ocean please ?"

And then, two options.
A joyful organization of picking-sorting-recyclinq
Or a booo and "she was not *so* good, I came to follow the others"

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David Revoy
@davidrevoy@framapiaf.org replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@nartagnan Cute and effective for a message in a fourth panel. Thanks!
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der.hans
@lufthans@mastodon.social replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@davidrevoy kiss cam with two boats pulled alongside each other and the captains snuggling
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Diane
@alienghic@timeloop.cafe replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@davidrevoy

The mermaid's assistants start swimming through the ships selling snacks, t-shirts, and other concert style merchandise.

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David Revoy
@davidrevoy@framapiaf.org replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@alienghic That's already a classic in the comments 🙂 https://social.treehouse.systems/@juliancalaby/114925722125089697 other declination also made the assistants little crabs, and also with Qr code, 'follow us' message, etc... A good lead.
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nightoo
@nightoo@chaos.social replied  ·  activity timestamp 2 months ago
@davidrevoy the sailors pull out their instruments, to return the favor and share their music with her in turn.
Though I feel like this might really need another panel for some sort of harmonic climax where they end up making music together
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