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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

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Tell us what your MC’s home is like.
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Kira owns a house on a colony planet of the Union. It's a not so dense populated world so the homes tend to be on the bigger side also it was planned to to Hause her parents, her sisters and herself.
She only lives in a small portion of the house around 55 square feet with 2 rooms, a batch, toilet and a brought window front to a coastal area. The colony is known for their agriculture on our today's earth it would most like resemble Schleswig-Holstein or Denmark. The colony produces a lot of different crops for not so easily farmable worlds.

Arkham lives on Terra in London in an small apartment over a closed, cir er restaurant, she owns the Apartment and the Restaurant room but not the whole complex building.

London in the 24. Century lays directly on the northern ocean and even has sand strands and palm trees in a thick as it gets fog.
Big Ben sits➡️

#PennedPossibilities 733 #StarRyde #KiraKnox #Arkham #Ashlei #Home #SciFi #WIP #writing

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@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de replied  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

733 2/2

⬅️ In the ground surrounded by water barriers & they desperately try to get it's foundation dry enough to start relocating it. London has a broad beach area with fine sand but only small portions are usable as swimming areas, they have a extra barrier against the highly toxic see water. London is the center of the Terra based education facilities of the Union & the alliance. So it's has a lot of interplanetary flair and yes big parts of London we would know today where swallowed by the north Sea as it expanded into an real ocean. At least the new city parts are immison positive.

Ash is either at home onboard of the Ghoz'Tarc or as the AI of the Ship in space. She clearly prefers Union space because it's more dense populated and rarely attacked.

#PennedPossibilities 733 #StarRyde #London #KiraKnox #Arkham #Ashlei #Home #SciFi #WIP #writing

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

732

Is your WIP a singular novel, a series of books, serial fiction, comics, or fanfiction? (Or something else entirely? Explain.)

Yes.
No, not again.
Answer can be found, in German, under last month Phantastik Prompts for 05.06.2025
and others that I didn't look up rn.

https://nerdculture.de/@AnnaSaultron/114630092695246082

#PennedPossibilities 732 #StarRyde #StarRydeSelfInsertRomanceAlternateUniverse #SRSIRAU #writing mostly #SciFi #WIP's

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@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de replied  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

733

Tell us what your MC’s home is like.
1/2
Kira owns a house on a colony planet of the Union. It's a not so dense populated world so the homes tend to be on the bigger side also it was planned to to Hause her parents, her sisters and herself.
She only lives in a small portion of the house around 55 square feet with 2 rooms, a batch, toilet and a brought window front to a coastal area. The colony is known for their agriculture on our today's earth it would most like resemble Schleswig-Holstein or Denmark. The colony produces a lot of different crops for not so easily farmable worlds.

Arkham lives on Terra in London in an small apartment over a closed, cir er restaurant, she owns the Apartment and the Restaurant room but not the whole complex building.

London in the 24. Century lays directly on the northern ocean and even has sand strands and palm trees in a thick as it gets fog.
Big Ben sits➡️

#PennedPossibilities 733 #StarRyde #KiraKnox #Arkham #Ashlei #Home #SciFi #WIP #writing

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

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MC POV: Tell us about the last time you felt guilty.

Kira Made a hm sound, more through her nose than her mouth:
"You Know what's funny like in a cynical 'Haha, I could laugh til I die' way? Survivors guilt doesn't stop... It never ends it just fades, but it stays like this vulture looming over you in the desert. You get used to it over time especially if it's comes up so swexing often."

Arkham looked erplexed:
"Thanks for letting me know in advance before I try to waste my life running from it, I guess I never pilot a shuttle again."

Ash's voice crackled through the speaker as if she tried to swallow without a throat: "I am not programmed to feel guilt, however like Captain Knox & FC Pakthi, the resent loss of Captain Johanson...
bothers... me, the uplink between the captain & myself let's me 'expirience' things differently as before. It is like reading about a color & seeing it for the 1. time.

#PennedPossibilities 731 #StarRyde #KiraKnox #Arkham #Ashlei #writing #SciFi #WIP

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@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de replied  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

732

Is your WIP a singular novel, a series of books, serial fiction, comics, or fanfiction? (Or something else entirely? Explain.)

Yes.
No, not again.
Answer can be found, in German, under last month Phantastik Prompts for 05.06.2025
and others that I didn't look up rn.

https://nerdculture.de/@AnnaSaultron/114630092695246082

#PennedPossibilities 732 #StarRyde #StarRydeSelfInsertRomanceAlternateUniverse #SRSIRAU #writing mostly #SciFi #WIP's

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

731
MC POV: Tell us about the last time you felt guilty.

Kira Made a hm sound, more through her nose than her mouth:
"You Know what's funny like in a cynical 'Haha, I could laugh til I die' way? Survivors guilt doesn't stop... It never ends it just fades, but it stays like this vulture looming over you in the desert. You get used to it over time especially if it's comes up so swexing often."

Arkham looked erplexed:
"Thanks for letting me know in advance before I try to waste my life running from it, I guess I never pilot a shuttle again."

Ash's voice crackled through the speaker as if she tried to swallow without a throat: "I am not programmed to feel guilt, however like Captain Knox & FC Pakthi, the resent loss of Captain Johanson...
bothers... me, the uplink between the captain & myself let's me 'expirience' things differently as before. It is like reading about a color & seeing it for the 1. time.

#PennedPossibilities 731 #StarRyde #KiraKnox #Arkham #Ashlei #writing #SciFi #WIP

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

730
2nd Anniversary Edition: Share a blurb, summary, or tiny snippet explaining your WIP to everyone in the hashtag.

happy birthday or well anniversary. 🥳🎊

Take 1:
Scout space ship full of queer and not so queer soldiers is on a secret mission deep into uncharted/enemy/hostile territory with a shot trans*humanism × romance VS drama × comedy.

Take 2:
What if Star Trek and Mass Effect had a child that is bullied by Warhammer 40K.

Take 3:
Remember Mimic?
Mimic × King Kong army vs the Space UN.

Take 4
That time a complete noob tried to create the SciFi equivalent to LOTR
...
(note to myself more original like take one ?/

Take 5
What does it mean, to keep ones decency & humanity in a universe where humans see themself as a failed species, despite being a defending force against total annihilation?
What does it mean, to discover that humanity means more than we thought?
What does it take to lead a crew on a uncertain & deadly mission?

#PennedPossibilities 730 #StarRyde#SciFi#WIP

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

730
2nd Anniversary Edition: Share a blurb, summary, or tiny snippet explaining your WIP to everyone in the hashtag.

happy birthday or well anniversary. 🥳🎊

Take 1:
Scout space ship full of queer and not so queer soldiers is on a secret mission deep into uncharted/enemy/hostile territory with a shot trans*humanism × romance VS drama × comedy.

Take 2:
What if Star Trek and Mass Effect had a child that is bullied by Warhammer 40K.

Take 3:
Remember Mimic?
Mimic × King Kong army vs the Space UN.

Take 4
That time a complete noob tried to create the SciFi equivalent to LOTR
...
(note to myself more original like take one ?/

Take 5
What does it mean, to keep ones decency & humanity in a universe where humans see themself as a failed species, despite being a defending force against total annihilation?
What does it mean, to discover that humanity means more than we thought?
What does it take to lead a crew on a uncertain & deadly mission?

#PennedPossibilities 730 #StarRyde#SciFi#WIP

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

729
Tell us about one place your MC would love to either visit or revisit.

Kira:
Home, seriously after weeks in space nothing is more compelling than just lump down on your own couch. Especially after THIS mission...

Arkham:
Same here maybe both lump down on the same couch? So it would be either the colony in which Kira has the house she inherited or Arkham's apartment in London.

Ashlei:
Drydock I guess it's as much couch as it gets for a space ship.

And yes call me lazy but seriously if you travel for several month you can't tell me your couch at home isn't where you want to be or your bed but some where else. Now multiply this with an tuna can of a space craft. I mean ~180 meters are long for a vehicle but subtract the hull and everything that isn't livable area shared by ~40 persons and you take every chance of isolation.
That's why they installed private space cargo containers.

#PennedPossibilities 729 #StarRyde#KiraKnox#Arkham#Ashlei #writing#SciFi#WIP

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

728
Write about something your antagonist (or villain) frequently forgets.

Anna stared at the prompt, gently raised a hand:"Waiter the bill please I need to leave."
The prompt glazed back.
"Quickly," she added.

Well Ariaene basically can't make new memories or very few that make the transition between short & long term memory.
They is unable to recall memories in the right order & has huge memory gaps of their past.
It is to them like someone took your live, cut it into pieces & shook it in a cocktail shaker. The surface memories are the clearest ones. On missions they are usual very efficient & gets stuff done in under 24 hours. The problem sets in every time they goes to sleep, rarely if they is awake.
Ariaene has an collection of written down memories. Their daily routine involves Audio instructions for the next day, mission logs & post it's on the inside of their armor, skin notes & tattoos, etc.

#PennedPossibilities 728 #StarRyde#AriaeneJohnsen#AJ#AJohnsen#AntagonistJunior

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

727.
MC POV: Do you remember your 21st birthday? Describe it as best you can.

Kira:"Why the 21st? That's a weirdly specific ask."

Arkham:"It was 4 years ago of course I remember that but what's so interesting about the 21st?"

Ashlei:"I am not born, if we take my activation date as my date of birth I am only 7 years old including development, only one year as the AI of the Ghoz'Tarc after her... my refit."

Author_ity note I'm well aware that for U.S. citizens the 21. Birthday is a big thing. But for other countries in the world it's simply isn't that big of a deal if it isn't their same age of full blown adult rights. In Germany as an example it's 18. while motorcycle enthusiastic people have to wait till they are 25 to get their full blown "grown up motorcycle experience."

Since we are in the 24. Century in my story & Terra has changed a lot the US & its "special" customs are mostly gone as many others & yes everyone uses metric.😋
#PennedPossibilities 727 #StarRyde#SciFi#WIP

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 3 months ago

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If your SC had a picture frame with slots for 3 photos, who / what would be in the pictures?

For SC's I have a faint clou let's take

XO L.Jenkins he and his husband picture one would be them on their first interaction Jenkins in a fur suit.
His future husband handing him some water on a break. Second on their first date both in sharp cut tuxedos in the midst of a weird looking bar & the third on their wedding where Jenkins husband wears a tuxedo topside combined with a Scottish kilt. What isn't on the scenes is how Jenkins got carried away by him all the way from the priest to the party location.

XO W.Troika, his wife in the middle with him probably on their wedding, two of his 4 daughters on the left and two on the right.

Security Chief S.Crosby her daughter Denise the main reason she fights for everyone else.

#PennedPossibilities 726 #StarRyde#LJenkins#WilliamTroika#SilasCrosby#GhozTarcCrew #writing#SciFi#WIP

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 4 months ago

725
Do you have a favorite character in your current WIP?

Not all characters are created equal as much as it pains me to say it.
I really like Mondira, Arkham, J., Kira, Ash, Rose, Tal & it shifts regularly, but overall I can say, that main characters have more "love" from me than side characters. Ariaene is growing on me for quite some time now and even Jenkins slowly gets a shape I appreciate more than before.

#PennedPossibilities 725 #StarRyde#SciFi#WIP #writing

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 5 months ago

08.06.2025 Schreibratgeber - man liebt sie oder man hasst sie. Zu welcher Fraktion gehörst du?

Oder sie sind einem egal?
Ich bin keine Person die Hilfe Bücher irgendeiner Art liest wenn ich ehrlich bin, Betriebsanleitungen ausgenommen.
Und ausser Krawattenknoten tue ich mich schwer Dinge aus Büchern zu lerne . Audiovisuelle Medien wie videos oder Bildhafte Anleitungen mit Audio Erklärungen helfen mir wesentlich mehr und der Rest ist learning by crashing.😅

#Phantastikprompts 08.06.2025

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@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de replied  ·  activity timestamp 5 months ago

09.06.2025
Haben deine Figuren reale Vorbilder?

Beigroßzügiger Auslegung 100+. Und mindestens genauso viele Fiktive.

Ich kopiere keine Menschen aus meinem Leben 1:1 oder Personen von denen ich nur einen 2D Moment Eindruck habe. (Ein 2D Moment Eindruck wäre: XYZ schnappt dir das letzte Lieblingsessen im Laden weg & deshalb muss diese Person ein doofer Armleuchter sein).

Jede Figur die ich schreibe hat einen Mix aus echten Menschen & anderen Fiktiven Figuren als "Vorbilder"

Für Kira war es unter anderem ein US-Polizist aus den 1930 der es im Alleingang mit der Mafia aufgenommen hat, Teile meiner Familie, "Paragon, Sole Survivor, Spacer, female Commander Shepard" aus Mass Effect 1-3, Major Kira Nerrys aus Star Trek DS9 mit einem Hauch 7of9 aus Star Trek Voyager plus dem wovon ich denke dass es interessant sein könnte bzw das mich fasziniert zu entwickeln.

#PhantastikPrompts 09.06.2925 #StarRYDE #KiraKnox #schreiben #SciFi #WIP

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 5 months ago

#PhantastikPrompts 06.06.
Wie lautet der letzte Satz, den du gestern geschrieben hast? (Falls du gestern nichts geschrieben hast, poste einfach irgendein Zitat, das du gerne teilen würdest. Wir sind hier nicht in der Schule und es gibt auch keine Fleißbienchen 😄)

Okay der letze Kontext Abschnitt (😅) im aktuellen Star Ryde WIP" ist:

"Was hättest du tun können?
Eine ausgebildete Attentäterin, wesentlich älter als ihr Spezies durchschnitt, extrem Erfahren & so gefährlich, dass die Allianz mehere 5er teams zur Verhaftung empfiehlt, sie nicht zu konfrontieren sondern auf Verstärkung zu warten.“

Dem Spontanen Draft:

Without her the last decade wouldn't have been possible.
Darkness surrounded her as her consciousness faded, her inner voice whispered a painful: "Sorry Hun..."

Und der letzte im allgemeine Gestern
"Ich präsentiere die U.I.A.S. Ghoz'Tarc naja als Prototyp drawing erstmal nur für die grobe Form.😅"

#PhantastikPrompts 06.06.2025 #StarRyde #Worm #FanFiction #schreiben

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 5 months ago

04.06.2025
Stellst du deinen Werken Zitate voran? Wenn ja, wonach wählst du sie aus? Wenn nein, warum nicht?

Bisher nicht.
Habe ich bislang nicht drüber nachgedacht und ich stehe dem irgendwie gespalten Gegenüber.

Auf der einen Seite kann es die Stimmung eines Werkes ankündigen, hinweise geben etc.

Auf der anderen finde ich es schlichtweg nervend.

Ein Zitat ist immer ohne Zusammenhang und bei weitem nicht automatisch eine Philosophischen Glanzleistung, moralische Wahrheit etc weil es jemand nutzt.

Zitate können ein Mehrwert sein um intelligente Aussagen hervorzuheben aber in unserer heutigen Zeit sind sie meist einfach nur ein billiges framing device geworden, denen viel zu viele grinsend, ohne selbst nachzudenken zustimmen oder sich drüber aufregen ohne auch nur eine Spur einer Idee des Rahmens in dem die Aussage getroffen/herausgefordert wurde zu kennen.
Ich denke deshalb würde ich eher darauf verzichten.

#PhantastikPrompts 04.06.2025 #schreiben

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@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de replied  ·  activity timestamp 5 months ago

05.06.2025
Ist dein aktuelles Projekt ein Stand-alone oder Teil einer Reihe?

Eigentlich ist es eher ein multi Media Franchise so wie es sich anfühlt...

Ich habe ganz klar Dinge wie Serien und Filme, Musik und Videospiele im Kopf, Comics, Mangas, Modellbausätze🤩 etc. Ich habe ein Dokument mit Hinweisen und visuellen Tipps für Designer und Propbauer (wenn auch nur Handschriftlich auf Deutsch).

Und ich habe heute Nacht 7 Stunden mit meinem mehr als dürftigen digital painting skills am Handy die Form der Ghoz'Tarc erarbeitet...

Mein Worldbuilding ist an und für sich "zu schade" für nur ein Star Ryde Buch und gelinde gesagt etwas Größenwahnsinnig. Es gibt Charactere die ihr eigenes Spotlight verdienen und viel zu viel Background Material (halt perfekt um Später mehr daraus zu machen) aber so wie ich mit der Story struggle steht das alles noch in den Sternen... (Ironisch bei einer Weltraumreisen Geschichte...)

#PhantastikPrompts 05.06.2025 #StarRyde #schreiben #SciFi #WIP

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@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 5 months ago

2/2 03.06.2025
jetzt klar ist. In der ferne tobt der Sand in einer Art Sturm, an dessen Spitze ein schwarzes Hovercraft schwebt, das genau auf sie zuhält."

#PhantastikPrompts 03.06.2025 #StarRyde #schreiben #Teaser #SciFi #WIP

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 5 months ago

Nicht wirklich *schüttelt ihre Handgelenke und zeigt ihre Manschetten Innenseite*

"Wie sie sehen, sehen sie nichts, offensichtlich.
Seien sie jetzt Life™ dabei wie ich mir einen Teaser aus den Fingern sauge!" *Sticht sich in den Finger zum Blutzucker kontrollieren.* "Das hat nichts mit dem Trick zu tun, ist aber schön theatralisch. Außerdem muss ich ja irgendwas aus meinem Finger saugen." *Leckt den Blutstropfen weg.* "Bagh Eisen..." *Schaut auf das Testgerät.* Aber zumindest ist der Zucker gut."

"Wir schreiben das Jahr 2335 (+/-),Terra und ihre Verbündeten kämpfen einen Kampf in den Weiten des Alls um das Überleben, in einer kleinen Stadt in der Mojave Wüste Terras steht eine junge Frau, eingehüllt in weite Gewänder, gezeichnet von den Strapazen der Wüste. Gerade hat sie eine dramatische Erfahrung gemacht, die ihr leben stärker verändern wird als es ihr

#PhantastikPrompts 03.06.2025 #StarRyde

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Anna Saultron :progresspride:
@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 5 months ago

02.06.2025
Schreibst du Widmungen in deine Bücher?

Bisher ist es nicht mal ein Buch...
Ich habe durchaus vor Dank auszusprechen an entsprechende Personen.
Aber viel lieber möchte ich kleine Details und Eastereggs einbauen die Menschen betreffen die mir geholfen haben dass die Geschichte Vorrang geht oder etwas anderes, für mich, außergewöhnliches Getan haben.

Und nein es wird nicht so plump nur Buchtitel in eine Bibliothek zu stellen und die Schreibenden zu erwähnen... Das hebe ich mir für andere Dinge auf...😅

#PhantastikPrompts 02.06.2025 #StarRyde #schreiben #Widmungen #Eastereggs #SciFi #WIP

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@AnnaSaultron@nerdculture.de  ·  activity timestamp 5 months ago

Woran schreibst du gerade?

Momentan ist es ausnahmsweise nicht meine SciFi story (oder nicht direkt) Star Ryde weil es mir einfach nicht aus dem Handgelenk fließt.

Stadtdessen habe ich, interessanterweise in Englisch, eine Kurzgeschichte mit 1577 Worten als Quickdraft zustande gebracht, welche eigentlich auf dem Selbsterstellten Rollenspiel-Regelwerk eines ehemaligen guten Freundes basiert, zu der Online Superhelden Welt von Worm, aber genauso gut in Cyberpunk-, Shadowrun-, StarRyde- oder besser in mein nicht wirklich ernstgemeintes Star Ryde Self Insert Romance Alternative Universe passen würde.

#PhantastikPrompts 01.06.2025 #StarRyde #Worm #Homebrew #PenAndPaper #Rollenspiel #CyberpunkGenre #Original #StarRydeSelfInsertRomanceAlternateUniverse #SRSIRAU

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